Met through a chum, noticed at sight
Behind her back, exchanging bytes
Started with a laugh, leading to a flirt
Thousand miles apart, yet close at heart
***
Unreachable moments, made me forlorn
Waiting to see online, became the norm
Defying the situation, yearned to be together
Every moment treasured, in the cyber shelter
***
Journey back home, never got bored
Entranced in daydreams, over the globe
Sending short messages, back and forth
First prolonged kiss, delicacy and warmth
***
Ill-timed text message, insecure boyfriend
Losing all that mattered, despair descend
Yet no remorse, with abounding appetence
Cherishing the memories, in endless reminiscence
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Guys... that's my first poem. I would love to hear your say.
Cheers!!
Hammett
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Really cool and oh so familiar.. :)
ReplyDeleteI am all nostalgic now,its amazing how things are hardly the way you imagin them to be.. but as u said.. its all about not having regrets and cherishing the moments..
Hail Hail!
summed up the norm of "modern" relationships ;)
ReplyDeletecool poem..
keep em' comin.. :D
thanks a lot guys...
ReplyDeletecheers :))
yo! hammet cool blog you got here
ReplyDeletei liked the last line :>
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so who is that on the other side of that window.....im anxious to know that...you might want to think on the vocabulary next time....for a poem
ReplyDeleteawww...sad story...
ReplyDeletei liked the poem. agree with hudhuhandhu
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ReplyDeletewhoa man u r awesome.... keep it commin man :)
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nightmare: Thanx...
ReplyDeleteneobe: yea.. i liked that line too :P
kukulhu: wud take ur advise.. girl huh...
bulhaa: sad dhoa... thanks
anonymous: uh??? ur intense curiosity dhoa.... hehe..
rannamaari: thanks man.. would try...
thanks to all of u who read it...
cheers!!