Do you remember the old days?
When we used to talk every day,
When we used to laugh every day,
I would never forget those days.
***
Like teenagers in love, we were mad;
Those incredible dreams we had;
With you nothing at all seems bad;
Those days are long gone, yet so sad.
***
Dreaming about you is my passion;
In that, I don’t want any regression;
From no one, I need any compassion;
Without you, I’m in severe depression.
***
Dreams we had; lying on the beach,
Moonlit night, on the sandy beach,
To be alone, far from anyone’s reach,
For each other, we were peach.
***
Life would’ve been much better together,
Without me, you’ve gone further,
Thoughts and heartbeat, making life wither,
I’m lonely with feelings, trying to smother.
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Cheers!!
Hammett
oh u poor poor soul! No wonder u have insomnia ;)
ReplyDeletenice work though!
though reliving some of the childhood memories can make u cringe =P
its a nice poem.. :D
ReplyDeletehudhuhandhu... u got a point there... thanx....
ReplyDeletemini... thanks to u...
heyyyyyy thats such a niiiiiiiice poem......very touchyyyyy
ReplyDeletewow i love this one!
ReplyDeletethanks guys... last poem of the year is comin out soon :D cheers!!
ReplyDeleteOuch,that hurt!
ReplyDeleteLovely piece of poetry there :)
Sameera - Thank u!! :) nice to see you here..
ReplyDeletewow.. lovely.. wht a poetry...
ReplyDeletevery touching .. u can go much further in that;)