Sunday, December 30, 2007

Caught in Loneliness

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Do you remember the old days?

When we used to talk every day,

When we used to laugh every day,

I would never forget those days.

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Like teenagers in love, we were mad;

Those incredible dreams we had;

With you nothing at all seems bad;

Those days are long gone, yet so sad.

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Dreaming about you is my passion;

In that, I don’t want any regression;

From no one, I need any compassion;

Without you, I’m in severe depression.

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Dreams we had; lying on the beach,

Moonlit night, on the sandy beach,

To be alone, far from anyone’s reach,

For each other, we were peach.

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Life would’ve been much better together,

Without me, you’ve gone further,

Thoughts and heartbeat, making life wither,

I’m lonely with feelings, trying to smother.

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Cheers!!

Hammett

9 comments:

  1. oh u poor poor soul! No wonder u have insomnia ;)
    nice work though!
    though reliving some of the childhood memories can make u cringe =P

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  2. hudhuhandhu... u got a point there... thanx....

    mini... thanks to u...

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  3. heyyyyyy thats such a niiiiiiiice poem......very touchyyyyy

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  4. thanks guys... last poem of the year is comin out soon :D cheers!!

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  5. Ouch,that hurt!

    Lovely piece of poetry there :)

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  6. Sameera - Thank u!! :) nice to see you here..

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  7. wow.. lovely.. wht a poetry...
    very touching .. u can go much further in that;)

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