Beauty is in her heart, touched me so deep;
Unexpected attention, changed to love so steep
Tender is her voice, always make my day;
Trusted me like hell, never notion of breakaway;
Enchanting she is, with her I feel secure;
Resilience she brings, she is my life’s fixture;
Few moments, makes life so meaningful;
Love she gives, keeps my heart full;
Yearned for us, could’ve been so joyful.
Everlasting desire, keeps me spellbound;
Frenzy I am, daydreams that surround;
Fruitless I am, losing her I was astound;
Everyday so long, my mind her voices relay;
Crushed my heart, yet she wouldn’t betray;
Treasured moments, never fades away.
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Cheers!!! Hammett
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i luurvv dat picture aathee..and the wordings are sooo nice =]
ReplyDeletethanks buttercupss... ;)
ReplyDeletedeedja watch the movie??
ReplyDeleteu shuud
u shuud.
wWoOWw..veryy touchyy..salhi varah.
ReplyDeleteooooooooh.... niiiice :D
ReplyDeletebulhaa.. what's that movie...? I haven't watched it...
ReplyDeletethanks all of u guys... cheers.. :)
wow very good poem bro
ReplyDeleteshamil
niice!
ReplyDeletehey man its " OBI "
ReplyDeletelove it...
ReplyDeletehappy ?
I REALLY HATE POEMS !!!
thanks to everyone...
ReplyDeleteby the way, neo... u should start liking poems.. hehe.. who hates it... damn!!
"Trusted me like hell"??
ReplyDeleteI too don't like poetry unless it's written by a poet.
simon.. thanx for dropping by and the comment... I'm not a poet at all.. hehe.. just doing something for fun...
ReplyDeleteby the way, "like hell" is an expression used meaning "very much" .. maybe that term is not suitable here. It's informal..
cheers!! :)
i liked the poem. but if i may, it kinda felt like u were trying too hard to make it read BUTTERFLY EFFECT than what u really wanted to say in the poem. its nice nevertheless. cheers. and u really should watch the movie. varah obi.
ReplyDeletekaiza shozey - In fact, i tried it that way.. the flow isn't good dhoa.. anyway glad u liked it.. i haven't watched the movie.. i should.... cheers!! :)
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