Thursday, January 17, 2008

Mind Tortures the Innocent Body


Laying there lost in sensation,

Heart following music’s pulsation;

Locked in thoughts of uncertainty,

Will it be the same for eternity?


Mind would not rest at all, ever,

The exhausted body sometimes quiver.

All it need is a few hours of sleep!

Does it hear the sensations deep?


Cheers!!

Hammett

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19 comments:

  1. KeshiJanuary 17, 2008 at 10:24 AM

    even when my body is sleeping, my mind is wide awake..

    Keshi.

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2008 at 11:41 AM

    I know how many hrs u sleep! But I can't sleep tht much!

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  3. UnknownJanuary 17, 2008 at 11:44 AM

    Keshi - thanks for sharing that.. :)

    Yasser - ah, u know that... hehe.. that's good... i dont' sleep that much all the time though!! :)
    you should try... cheers!!

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  4. NessaJanuary 18, 2008 at 1:49 AM

    I could go to sleep right now.

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  5. SolitaireJanuary 18, 2008 at 11:45 AM

    Take some benadryl..and start snoring within minutes!!

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  6. PemPeNeyNo AnEsThEyShiYaJanuary 18, 2008 at 12:59 PM

    hmm.. i used to sleep aruond 2 or 3 at nights,,, even i have to wake up early!! :/.. nidhi naannanee hama...

    nice poem though! cheers

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  7. PreethiJanuary 18, 2008 at 8:10 PM

    Try some deep abdominal breathing lying straight. Will give you a restful sleep. Mind, body and soul!

    Hammett i enjoy reading spontaneos poems but not so much the ones that rhyme! Maybe you cud experiment with a few other techniques as well... just a suggestion :)

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  8. UnknownJanuary 18, 2008 at 11:00 PM

    nessa - of course, hehe.. :)

    solitaire - I'm not a person of medication.. anyway if it gets to that level, I would take your advice... thanks.. :)

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  9. UnknownJanuary 18, 2008 at 11:03 PM

    sunrise - yea, i can understand... thanks... ;)

    Preeti - I've tried that..doesn't seem to work.. i'd try again... thanks for the suggestion.. Haiku - kind of old Japanese poetry.. been thinking about givin it a try... cheers!! :)

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 18, 2008 at 11:34 PM

    Sounds like someone was busy doing extracurricular activities when someone wrote this poem!!!!!

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  11. ceedyJanuary 19, 2008 at 12:14 AM

    stop drinking that coffee - smoking that white thingy - it might just help - if not - start another blog for non sleep time

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  12. AnonymousJanuary 19, 2008 at 1:19 AM

    your exam stress is triggering your poetic being too..isn't that nice? heheh

    well-written one...

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  13. UnknownJanuary 19, 2008 at 2:12 AM

    anonymous - yep, that someone is me ;)

    ceedy - I'd take the latter advice.. hehe.. thanks a lot . :)

    Shaari - yea, it is... Thanks.. :)

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  14. ieccoJanuary 20, 2008 at 12:15 AM

    aaaaaaaaaaah im so sleepy now.. good one =)

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  15. LenaJanuary 20, 2008 at 6:12 PM

    good one as for the poem.
    but bad one as for not getting sleep :P

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  16. Born FreeJanuary 20, 2008 at 9:17 PM

    I think you should meet wee willie winky??? ;)

    http://www.answers.com/topic/wee-willie-winkie

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  17. WritingsForLifeJanuary 21, 2008 at 3:23 AM

    yep, it is something to think about.... the first thing our busy routine takes from us is SLEEP and we are too quick to ignore the most important thing we need.
    Cool Post!
    Cheers!

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  18. UnknownJanuary 21, 2008 at 6:57 AM

    I-kko - is it that boring to make you sleepy.. hehe... ;)

    Lena - Yeah... ups n downs... it would get better... :)

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  19. UnknownJanuary 21, 2008 at 6:59 AM

    Bornfree - Who's wee willie winky.. hehe.. I'm gonna meet and find out what that is... thanx... :)

    Raaji - yea... mostly like that.. glad u liked it.. cheers!! :)

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